As I was not able to finish reading the whole book, but how I would end this book would be by continuing on with the plot where the two best friends start to get jealous of each other and hate but then because friends again. Another thing I would do is go into depth more about how the company is corrupt in a way and explain that. I would also change the relationships of some of the characters to make it more interesting.
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Mae has continued to learn about her job and has increased her social media presence. She enroles her parents into a health benefit program. She then installs small cameras to watch over her dad. Over time she agreed to participate in a test for the company. I think I would be friends with Kalden or Mae. I would probably be a person trying to work for this company. This would be because I would want to be part of the most influential company in the world. I think I would get along with a lot of the people working there because they seem like the kind of people I naturally attract too. I would probably struggle with the social media people, because I don't really like to use it.
will be commenting on Diego D and Maddi P DPs. Mae has been working for a few weeks now and has meet multiple new people who work there. She had lunch with the man she talked to at a party on her first day there. She has started to learn more about what the company does in secret and how much it is open about. Her relationship with Annie has stayed the same they are still very close friends and talk a lot. They often eat lunch together and message during work. The relation she between her and her boss Dan, is very underdeveloped at this point in the book. There is not much communication or interaction besides when she sees him in the morning and his messaging her throughout the day saying “your doing great” or “keep up the good work”. Another character that was only briefly seen in the book was a man supposedly called ‘Kalden’ and worked upstairs. He had come down too see what she did as a job and how she does it. She found this man mysterious and interesting. I personally would like to see character development for ‘Kalden’ and see the relationship that happens between him and mae. I think that she should keep friends with Annie because she has a positive influence as a person and is high up in the company. I would also suggest that she gets to know Dan better and go into who ‘Kalden’ really is and what he does. So far the relationships have not had much effect on the plot of the story, but that could very quickly change. I will be commenting on Diego D and Maddi P DPs. The main characters name is Mae, she has been working at a utility company in her hometown. She hated that job so much she asked for a favor from her best friend. At the beginning she is going into her new job at the leading company of the world called “The Circle”. Her best friend Annie is part of the most important 40 people in this company. Right now she is just starting her first day and going through all of the information about working there. She also received a tablet and a new phone. What i think will happen to Mae is that she will start to move up the company and learn all of the secrets and find out that she does not agree with any of them. But she will not be able to leave, I think she will start to take the company down from the inside. I think Annie will try and stop her many times and that some of the people she meets there will help her take it down. I also think that someone will fall in love with her. I really like this book so far. It seems to be very well written and the plot so far is interesting. I also like the way the author uses descriptive language. My partners are Peter and Maddi.
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